A blog to chronicle the trials and tribulations of a new writer
Boy, this was a long post. I admire your skill in writing a story a day, though. X will be a challenge.
This was very realistic and vivid. It reminds me a bit of the animal hoarders shown on Animal Planet - well-intentioned at first, but with no knowledge of what the animals need. I suspect Charles may be neglected by his Mother in the same sort of careless way?
Yes, I can see that. Not in a malicious way, more as a consequence of unfortunate ignorance.
That was such an engrossing story. And I absolutely love the way it was told. Impressive!
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