Saturday, April 28, 2012

Yolanda and the Yugo

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9 comments:

  1. Coincidentally my Y is about a girl and and the colour green too...
    Vivid descriptions...like the ending.

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  2. Love this, love it love it love it! I'm sorry that the A to Z Challenge is going to be over soon. I want to read more! :)

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    1. Thanks! I'll be focusing on my novel after I finish up this project, but I'll definitely do more flash fiction in the future, I do enjoy it.

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  3. Loved this, found you today in the comments on AD Duling's blog. Going to go back and read your stories. I took the opposite approach and limited myself to 10 sentences but at least 100 words (10x10). I know you'll be staying on my reader list after the A-Z.

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    1. Thanks for visiting, I'm glad you enjoyed it. After this project I'll probably still do flash fiction once or twice a month. But I'll be focusing the majority of my efforts on my first novel.

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  4. Such a pity she ended up being late - can't help wondering why she didn't go with the bride if she was known for being late! But at least she got a reasonably happy ending out of it.

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    1. Icy, good point, I guess there's more to the story somewhere. Thanks for reading.

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