I agree that it was a good move to have the kid realize there was piss in it. I felt like I knew what was coming, but that made the ending unpredictable. Nice job.
Look forward to the rest of your challenge run…can’t believe we’ve had 14 days already! Cool little story. --Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012
Thanks you all. I'm glad you enjoyed the stories so far. I thought I hit a wall after G, but somehow, I don't know how, I've been able to push through.
Way to Go Lenny
ReplyDeleteKids...
ya gotta love em (including the kid in us)
Best with your writing
L for Lovely Lady
I love that the kid knew it was pissed in. I also like that Lenny still got him!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story! You do have talent. Such a fun way to do the challenge. You might enjoy my pass-the-paper activity. See you around!
ReplyDeleteI agree that it was a good move to have the kid realize there was piss in it. I felt like I knew what was coming, but that made the ending unpredictable. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI love the project you set for yourself for this month! Very ambitious - great job!
ReplyDeleteLook forward to the rest of your challenge run…can’t believe we’ve had 14 days already! Cool little story.
ReplyDelete--Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012
Twitter: @AprilA2Z
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Thanks you all. I'm glad you enjoyed the stories so far. I thought I hit a wall after G, but somehow, I don't know how, I've been able to push through.
ReplyDeleteCheers.