Friday, April 13, 2012

Lenny and the Lemonade

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8 comments:

  1. Way to Go Lenny
    Kids...
    ya gotta love em (including the kid in us)
    Best with your writing

    L for Lovely Lady

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  2. I love that the kid knew it was pissed in. I also like that Lenny still got him!

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  3. What a great story! You do have talent. Such a fun way to do the challenge. You might enjoy my pass-the-paper activity. See you around!

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  4. Michael Marvin Johnson is kind of a jerk! Maybe deserves some bitter lemonade.

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  5. I agree that it was a good move to have the kid realize there was piss in it. I felt like I knew what was coming, but that made the ending unpredictable. Nice job.

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  6. I love the project you set for yourself for this month! Very ambitious - great job!

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  7. Look forward to the rest of your challenge run…can’t believe we’ve had 14 days already! Cool little story.
    --Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012

    Twitter: @AprilA2Z
    #atozchallenge

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  8. Thanks you all. I'm glad you enjoyed the stories so far. I thought I hit a wall after G, but somehow, I don't know how, I've been able to push through.

    Cheers.

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